Active and passive constructions refer to two ways of structuring a sentence based on the relationship between the subject, verb, and object. Here’s a detailed explanation of each:
Active Construction
In an active sentence, the subject performs the action expressed by the verb, and the object receives the action. The general formula for an active sentence is:
Subject + Verb + Object
Example: “The dog chased the cat.”
- Subject: The dog
- Verb: chased
- Object: the cat
In this example, the subject (dog) is actively performing the action (chasing) on the object (cat).
Passive Construction
In a passive sentence, the subject receives the action expressed by the verb, and the object (or agent) performs the action. The general formula for a passive sentence is:
Subject + To Be + Past Participle (Verb) + By + Agent (Object)
Example: “The cat was chased by the dog.”
- Subject: The cat
- To Be: was
- Past Participle (Verb): chased
- By: by
- Agent (Object): the dog
In this example, the subject (cat) is receiving the action (being chased) performed by the agent (dog).
Here’s are the key differences between active and passive constructions:
Feature | Active Construction | Passive Construction |
Subject’s role | Performs the action | Receives the action |
Object’s role | Receives the action | Becomes the subject of the passive sentence |
Agent’s role | Subject of the active sentence | Introduced by the preposition “by” or omitted |
Sentence structure | Subject + Verb + Object | Subject (object of active) + To Be + Past Participle (Verb) + (By + Agent) |
Clarity and directness | More clear and direct | Less clear and direct |
Emphasis | Emphasizes the subject and action | Emphasizes the object (subject of the passive) and action |
Agent mentioning | Always mentioned as the subject | Can be mentioned using “by,” omitted, unknown, or unimportant |
Common usage | More common in general writing | More common in scientific, technical, or legal writing |
Preferred in academic and professional writing | Yes, for clarity and conciseness | In specific contexts, such as when the agent is intentionally de-emphasized or unknown |
Effect on sentence length | Generally shorter and simpler | Generally longer and more complex |
Avoiding the passive voice
In most cases, it’s preferable to use the active voice because it’s more concise, direct, and easier to understand. The active voice clearly shows who or what is performing the action.
Examples of active voice:
- The student wrote the essay. (The subject “student” performs the action “wrote”)
- My sister baked the cake. (The subject “sister” performs the action “baked”)
- The team will announce the new policy tomorrow. (The subject “team” performs the future action “will announce”)
Using the passive voice
While the active voice is generally preferred, there are situations where the passive voice can be useful or appropriate:
- When the actor is unknown or unimportant
- Example: The city was founded in 1792. (We don’t need to know who founded it.)
- When you want to emphasize the action over the actor
- Example: The book was banned by the government. (The focus is on the action of banning rather than who did it.)
- When you want to be impersonal or sound objective
- Example: Mistakes were made during the experiment. (Passive voice avoids directly assigning blame.)
- When you want to move the topic to the end of the sentence
- Example: The final decision will be made by the committee. (Emphasizes “the final decision”)
For certain types of academic writing that prohibit first-person pronouns, the passive voice can be employed when referring to one’s own actions. Avoid dangling modifiers when using the passive voice in complex sentences.
Active Voice with First-Person Pronouns | Passive Voice to Avoid First-Person Pronouns |
I conducted the experiment. | The experiment was conducted. |
We analyzed the data. | The data were analyzed. |
I will present my findings. | The findings will be presented. |
We have reviewed the literature. | The literature has been reviewed. |
I observed this phenomenon. | This phenomenon was observed. |